mistress of darkness
I love it when my baby gets rough,
Long black heels, never enough.
Tied down, feeling helpless in pain,
When she gets down, drives me insane.
Leather whips, blindfolds and straps,
My little girl makes me collapse.
Tied up, just a little rough play,
I’m submissive, what can I say.
Dressed up in leather and lace,
Playing our games all over the place.
Red marks, all over my back,
My baby girl knows how to attack.
Long nails, for drawing the blood,
Scratchin my itch, gonna be a flood.
My baby, she can’t get enough,
Before it’s all over, gonna get tough.
Bondage, It’s fun in the dark,
Kind of like love’s little hot spark.
Once you get a taste for it though,
Nights at home, are like a porn show.
Hellllooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! TMI TMI TMI!!!!!! But is erotic and goooooooodddddddd!!!!!!!!!! You’re really good writing erotic poems. Nice!!!
Marilyn (your angel)
October 11th, 2009 at 2:42 am
lol it’s a pretty interesting good comment. you should kinda note that it’s like R rated cause there are little kids around here…a lot…
but yeh it’s a pretty gd poem for the type of topic you’re writing about
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October 11th, 2009 at 3:06 am
Totally Hot ! ! love it
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October 11th, 2009 at 3:39 am
WOW….
You are good! I love your style.
It has a comical ending too!!
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October 11th, 2009 at 3:49 am
It’s great!
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October 11th, 2009 at 3:56 am
well… this is quite explicit, isn’t it?
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October 11th, 2009 at 4:04 am
Not everybody does!!!
I am an exception!!!
I hate the sight of blood!!!
And those just creates a mental image of the recent one i have just seen!!!
No ill feeling though……
There is a lot of talent in those!!
Cos he tries to present unpleasant occurence in a mild or pleasant manner!!!
Great work…. Honestly!!
keep writing!!
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October 11th, 2009 at 4:28 am
I loved your poem and found it quite interesting..
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October 11th, 2009 at 4:52 am
Hellllooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! TMI TMI TMI!!!!!! But is erotic and goooooooodddddddd!!!!!!!!!! You’re really good writing erotic poems. Nice!!!
Marilyn (your angel)
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